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[threeholerglory]

I don't have overly high hopes for this one but maybe it'll get in...Trying to go 2 for 2 off my phone...that'd be a better ratio than my actual camera!

[Jared Blech]

comments?

[Delta777LR]

It could be me but possibly odds are the aircraft dont look fully centered. we can see what Manny, Cary, Kenny or Nick V will say

[Cary]

Could have an issue with Soft, Grain (probably added when A.net processed the pic), and Centering (left to right). A.net likes their pics really sharp.

[Jared Blech]

thanks guys.

[Jared Blech]

a.net is being annoying rn, and is having the bug where it gives you the default image. i'll show you the revised copy tomorrow. Goodnight everybody.

[Jared Blech]

Here is the updated one. comments, tips much appriciated!-

[wunaladreamin]

Looks soft in the nose from the iPad.

[Jared Blech]

What about this one guys. If you have a comment/tip, can you guys maybe explain what I can do to fix the issue.
Also, it seems I am having trouble with sharpening the aircraft, when I see others on A.net and even the American 773 manny edited for me, my sharpens just don't look good... Any help is much appreciated.

[adscram14]

Looks low in the frame.

[RomNYC]

Swiss looks a little red.

[Jared Blech]

Thanks everybody, anything on the sharpning??

[Jared Blech]

Ok guys, lets hear it!!!

[wunaladreamin]

Too much dead space around the plane. It'll get a motive rejection.

[Jared Blech]

Is there anything i can do about that or do i have to start over? :(
Is that the only reason (please tell me if there are others, i like constructive criticism)
Thanks wunala!